I think you forgot to post a link
BUT i found it on your YT channel and listened to it and wow, HanaPro dubs were always top notch but they've gotten even better than I remember. The first chorus was the highlight for me, everything was perfectly timed, vocals were spot on, and the harmonies were very well balanced with the melody. It sounded like a professional mix. Of course everything else was great too, but the opening chorus was just perfect IMO. The only critique I can really think of was that the choruses after that sounded a little tinny? And the vox might have been a tidbit loud, but really, those are just nitpicks. Very very excellent job!