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Celia

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Sayonara Solitiare [COVER]
« on: August 19, 2009, 11:48:01 AM »
I did this for Jenna's birthday XD
I'm basically so busy currently that I haven't got the time for ANYTHING but I took at .... 6 hours long break LOL to finish this xD

This song hates me and my mic hates me more XD
I think my vocals are wayy too low when I hear it now, but then again I'm listening through my crappy speakers so what do I know XD;
Kari said it was fine I BELIEVE KARI THEN XD

I tried to sing soft and not use too much power cuz my dad tells me to stop doing it all the time LOL I hope it worked XD

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Re: Sayonara Solitiare [COVER]
« Reply #1 on: August 19, 2009, 02:35:29 PM »
aww...your vibrato...*envies you*

I know it's a birthday present so Im not gonna be much of a party-pooper with my criticism here. Your voice gets a bit drowned out at the chorus. Maybe raise the volume next time? And also, your chorus sounds a bit unstable, you were going a tiny bit fast especially at the 'yasashisa doushitara mieru no' part. Watch out for the rhythm/beat. Other than that, a very good job singing it! It's not an easy ballad, but a very beautiful song. I can hear emotion in your singing  ;D

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Re: Sayonara Solitiare [COVER]
« Reply #2 on: August 19, 2009, 09:59:13 PM »
LOL You can hear a vibrato and I nothing LOL XD

I had mayor issues with the chorus mixing wise o-o I turned my files up as much as I could and they were still drowning I have no idea why o.o *now Liana will kill me* I even lowered the instrumental xD But I lowered the first part too (my singing) *in case Liana sees this LOL PLEASE NO KILLING*
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Re: Sayonara Solitiare [COVER]
« Reply #3 on: August 21, 2009, 02:33:14 PM »
You sound so pretty, Celia!  In terms of tone, you were right on the money.  There were a couple of transitions from head to chest voice that were a little rough (once in the chorus and then that very last note), but other than that, it was so emotive and so beautiful!  I agree about the volume though-  it was kind of hard to hear you.  ;_;  Maybe some kind of compression might help? 

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Re: Sayonara Solitiare [COVER]
« Reply #4 on: August 22, 2009, 09:16:30 AM »
You sound so pretty, Celia!  In terms of tone, you were right on the money.  There were a couple of transitions from head to chest voice that were a little rough (once in the chorus and then that very last note), but other than that, it was so emotive and so beautiful!  I agree about the volume though-  it was kind of hard to hear you.  ;_;  Maybe some kind of compression might help?

In terms of tone, you were right on the money <- I will show my mom this LOL SHE SAID I SUCKED XD

I will work on the head to chest voice ^^ it rly hard though to not make it too ... powerfully kinda? do you have any tricks? :3

I will try and re-mix it at one point I rly have no idea why it wouldn't work o-o I truned down the karaoke so much that Liana would kill me if she saw it LOL so I'm still surprised it overpowers me o-o but I'll try the compression thing ^^
I love the Banjaks I will collect them all.

faktafaktafaktafaktafaktafaktafaktafaktafaktafaktafak^that's me BD

Also known as:
The bathroom singer
I RIKE TOKYO
C-E-L-I-A

Lines I owe:
Disco Drive - Ayuna
Don't Don - Reirei
Love in the ice - DC

 




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