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[Vocal/Mixing Critique] Sweets Station - Hare Ame Nochi Suki
« on: February 13, 2010, 08:56:12 PM »
Track oo1 of  Sweets Station first single, Happiness on a Rainy Day ~I Love You~

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::Cast::
Molly
Tomo
Celia
Jenna
Naniko
Valentine

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Re: [Vocal/Mixing Critique] Sweets Station - Hare Ame Nochi Suki
« Reply #1 on: February 26, 2010, 11:36:18 PM »
This was worked really hard on, so I'd appreciate some feedback.

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Re: [Vocal/Mixing Critique] Sweets Station - Hare Ame Nochi Suki
« Reply #2 on: March 05, 2010, 09:34:36 PM »
Soo pretty *o* I really have nothing else to say. It was just a very nice listen.
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Re: [Vocal/Mixing Critique] Sweets Station - Hare Ame Nochi Suki
« Reply #3 on: March 10, 2010, 12:42:06 AM »
Overall Positives:  Wow, everyone's vocals were great.  It was a beautiful cover.
Timing:  good.  Nothing to complain about.
Volume:  Some of the volumes sound not quite the same, but I'll really get into why in the next section.
Overall Sound:  In this song, you can really hear the difference in mic quality.  Jenna and Valentine 's mics (though sometimes Valentine's sounds just fine) are a bit tinny so maybe a little fiddling with PE could have helped.  Naniko and Molly's mics are pretty clear. Tomo is bit muffled, but Celia is really muffled.  Those could have been helped by either a high pass filter or some playing with PE.  Because of these kind of mic differences, while they may visual be the same volume, by ear they're different due to the different interferences of different frequencies. 
You know how when 2 people sing together it gets louder?  that's constructive interference.  Well, if you can imagine while 2 volumes add up together to make a loud volume, the volume of the frequency you want may might be not high enough, but because the other frequencies that are garbage are loud, it adds up to a big wave form.  PE or Parametric Equalizer is a great tool because it allows you to take your sound, and then select for the frequencies (usually described as Hz) that you want.  Voices tend to be in the higher frequency range, so when it's muffled, that means a lot of your extra volume is probably caused by lower frequency noise, so you can kind of weed that out by lowering the volume of your low freq stuff and increasing the volume of your high stuff.  However the tinny as well as hissy sounds are in the high high frequencies so you can turn those down to help.
I don't know if this make sense.  It makes more sense if I had a blackboard. Remember trig for those people who had high school?  Sound waves are no more than complicated sine and cosine waves.  I'll shut up now on my nerdy talk.
Overall Vocals:  Everyone was great... on pitch with energy.  It was so pretty *-*
Other:  I apologize for my long science lecture in the middle there.

I need to learn something about vocals to comment... but I really don't know much to help.

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Re: [Vocal/Mixing Critique] Sweets Station - Hare Ame Nochi Suki
« Reply #4 on: March 10, 2010, 04:14:47 AM »
Thank you so much for the advice, and compliments <33
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Re: [Vocal/Mixing Critique] Sweets Station - Hare Ame Nochi Suki
« Reply #5 on: March 10, 2010, 07:57:13 AM »
*ninja's in* MY MIC WAS RETARDED THAT DAY =D IT'S USUALLY CLEAR LOL XD *ninja's out* BD
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Re: [Vocal/Mixing Critique] Sweets Station - Hare Ame Nochi Suki
« Reply #6 on: March 10, 2010, 02:14:20 PM »
LOL I'M SORRY I'M STILL A NOOB AT MIXING <3
but i will learn how to work all those filters one day  :atsuko:
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Re: [Vocal/Mixing Critique] Sweets Station - Hare Ame Nochi Suki
« Reply #7 on: March 20, 2010, 06:13:41 PM »
I really like the variety of voices in this dub. There are SO many different vocal types mixed in there together that it just makes for an interesting piece of material. I was listening and the one part that really stuck out in my mind was whoever performed the first part of the first chorus. Whoever that was, it was a FLAWLESS performance. Everyone seemed so at ease with the song, which is hard to do without sounding strained.


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Re: [Vocal/Mixing Critique] Sweets Station - Hare Ame Nochi Suki
« Reply #8 on: March 20, 2010, 06:20:40 PM »
That was Celia. She did amazing here